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Comment from: jyoru [Visitor] · http://kayoaiko.blogspot.com
Indeed unedited, but I read the whole thing (in funny voices, but still...) and although it's sci-fi/fanfic, there may be potential. I don't know your editing process so it may be a little more coherent in places, nowadays.

There are conversations which could be drawn out for longer, the way it is; it's as if the characters have a one-track mind and know exactly what the other is thinking, at times.

Sounds like a Tuesday/Wednesday project, and before long I'll have the fictional Tanaka Reina weakening the knees of the most dedicated Sci-Fi reader.

If only you'd given me permission to do so. Well, you've put it up on the interwebs for all to see, so unless that book-deal goes through this week, I'm gonna edit this sum-bitch.
08/09/09 @ 04:45
Comment from: Matt_D [Member]
Be my guest.

At the moment tis' "stream of thought" hence the clunkiness of it all.
08/09/09 @ 10:42

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